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| [原创]I still remember ... |
作者 :扬帆
| 日期 : 2001-08-27 23:24 | 阅读数: 521 |
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I still remember that night
I still remember what you said
Everything was sleeping as usual
But you woke me, went ahead
The universe is so great
The distance between us is vast
You like a star,I am a planet
Please lighten me, do not impact
I still remember that night
I remember it was a midnight
You enjoyed fall there , it was spring here
and a golden autumn in my heart!
我还记得那个夜晚
我还记得你那轻轻的呼唤
一切都在沉睡，万籁俱寂
我醒了，你领着我穿过迷潭
世界是如此的浩瀚
你我相隔万水千山
宇宙中星星远离，难以交汇
而星辉却能照亮彼此，把夜幕点燃
我还记得那个夜晚
我记得那是个深沉的夜晚
你融于秋色，这里却春意阑珊
而金色的秋获，已长存于我心坎！
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| 回复人：yangfan
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回复时间：2001-8-27 23:29:19
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OLDTREE,
I did a little modification in this poem and upload it today.The porblem is the old one is still here. how can i cancel it?
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| 回复人：老树
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回复时间：2001-8-28 8:39:17
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i have canceled the old one.
Glad to see u appear
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| 回复人：流云
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回复时间：2005-02-28 09:08
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This one is better than the other. But I still think your chinese poems are much much better than English ones.haha.
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| 回复人：newsatan
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回复时间：2005-04-30 21:30
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| 回复人：枫非子
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回复时间：2005-05-15 12:34
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Agree with LiuYun. Chinese poem is better than English one .
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